Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Tuesday September, 3rd - Strange Fruit

  Deep in the country of Jiiblos hangs a magnificent fruit of marvelous taste and wonders. It hangs off the Sader tress in the Jiiblos mountains where the air is warm and the ground is soft. Although, many haven't ever seen this fruit; they say it grants is consumer with the extraordinary ability to fly, grow, shrink, expand, and many other abilities which are unknown. Only one man has ever experienced the once in a lifetime opportunity to consume one. This man's name was Charles Chango the third and he traveled to the top of the mountain to pick only one of the fruit. He described the mysterious fruit as being energizing, juicy, and cold to the touch which made the flavors tingle his taste buds more so than any other fruit. After that warm summer day he said he would never dare sink his teeth into another fruit besides that one again. Some may ask why but they will never know sense Charles Chango the third disappeared two days later. No one knows what happened to him but most now do not dare to got atop the Jiiblos mountains and pick from the Sader trees a single fruit. The Jiiblos mountains have never been more quiet.

1 comment:

  1. Very creative! I like your names for the fruits and the country where it comes from. also the person's name was humorous. I liked this story because you added some fun elements to it. and the ending was quite vivid.

    one thing I would like to point out though, you spelled the last word "quite" instead of "quiet".

    I would give this story 4.0 hearts! good job!

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